100 Themes: Rainbow - Redo

I wasn't at all happy with the strip that I posted on Sunday...It was late and I was exhausted from a long weekend at Comic Con.So I went back in, and added some better ink, and color to it. This one is a lot closer to what I had in my head when I was working on it.

Also, I thought with the four panel strips I might try this more blocky format.  What do you think of it?
Thanks for bearing with me.